Eclipse
Eclipse.The night is dark, no moon tonight.I stumble as I try to find my way without the silver light.The night is dark so I am blind.The night is dark, the moon has gone.Blotted out by earths...
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Ivor, I like the way you shifted the emphasis to make shadow rhyme with glow and vanish-ed with dreaad.Another great iambic tetrameter poem. Much enjoyed. ShelbyMetric feet with rhythmic beatwill keep...
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Eclipses are very powerful events to experience, even with modern scientific understanding of the process - it makes you feel utterly small and in awe. Well writ.DanWords are the mind's bridge - it's...
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Ivor,I love the personification here - wonderful. The old language gives it a weight that it wouldn't have had otherwise.A masterpiece.Rich
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Hmmmm Ivor Shelby's words "Another great iambic tetrameter poem" are so true and also let me know I still have so much to learn but with the "personification" that Rich mentioned for this superb poem,...
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To watch an eclipse is a humbling experience it underlines how small is man in the scheme of things
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